LANDING-PAGE COPY REFRESH
Your real offer, told in words that land
Service or course. We email you within 24h after checkout to begin.
It does not log into or host your site, invents no testimonials or numbers, and uses no fake urgency or dark patterns. No promise of more traffic, conversions, sign-ups, or sales. I promise a clearer, sharper, honest, persuasive page to spec.
You built the page. The offer is real. But the words aren't pulling their weight, and visitors leave without acting. This is a fixed-price rewrite of one landing or sales page, turned into clear, specific, benefit-led copy built around a single action.
You send me the page that isn't landing. I rewrite the headline, value props, body, FAQ, and call-to-action into an honest, persuasive structure. Nothing invented, no fake proof, no dark patterns. You keep full control of your own page.
What you get
- Headline that states the offerTwo headline options plus a sub-headline, so you can pick the angle that fits your audience and your voice.
- 3-5 benefit-led value propsYour features rewritten as concrete benefits a reader actually cares about, not feature lists they skim past.
- Skimmable body copyRewritten body that reads fast, keeps the reader moving, and never buries the point in filler.
- A real-objection FAQAn FAQ that answers the doubts that actually stop buyers, written to remove friction instead of dodging it.
- One clear primary CTAA single, direct call-to-action so the whole page points to one action instead of competing for clicks.
- Honest proof framingYour real testimonials and numbers framed to land with credibility. No invented quotes, no fabricated stats.
- Editable files plus a change noteYou get an editable Word file, a PDF, a 'what changed and why' note, and one revision round to refine the result.
How it works
- You send one landing or sales page whose words aren't converting the way you want.
- I rewrite the headline, value props, body, FAQ, and CTA around one clear action.
- Everything stays grounded in your real offer. Nothing is invented or exaggerated.
- You receive editable Word and PDF files plus a short note explaining each change.
- One revision round is included so you can refine wording to match your voice.
- You paste the copy into your own page, fully in control of the final result.
Turnaround and what I need from you
- Send the URL or current text of the one page you want rewritten.
- Share your real testimonials, numbers, or proof so I can frame them honestly.
- Tell me the single action the page should drive (buy, book, sign up, contact).
- A note on your audience and tone helps me match your voice.
- I deliver the rewritten page plus the change note, then one revision round on request.
What it does NOT include (honest limits)
- I do not log into, edit, or host your live site. You stay in control of your page.
- I invent no testimonials and no numbers. Proof comes only from what you provide.
- No fake urgency, no countdown tricks, no dark patterns of any kind.
- No promise of more traffic, conversions, sign-ups, or sales. Words don't guarantee outcomes.
- Scope is one page: headline, value props, body, FAQ, and CTA. It is not full-site copy, design, SEO, or ad management.
- What I promise: a clearer, sharper, honest, persuasive page written to spec.
Right for you if…
- You have a landing or sales page for a real offer, but its current words aren't converting interest into action.
- You want a clearer, sharper, benefit-led rewrite of your headline, value props, body, FAQ, and CTA at a fixed price.
- You want to keep full control of your own page and get editable Word + PDF files plus a note explaining what changed and why.
- You have real testimonials or numbers and want them framed honestly, not faked or inflated.
Probably skip it if…
- Skip this if you expect a guaranteed lift in traffic, conversions, sign-ups, or sales; I promise a clearer, sharper page, not a results number.
- Skip this if you want fake urgency, invented testimonials, or dark patterns; this rewrite uses none of those.
- Skip this if you need someone to log into or host your site, or to run more than one revision round; the work delivers editable files and one revision, and you implement them yourself.
Questions
Will this get me more sales or conversions?
No, and I won't claim it will. Copy is one lever among many, and results depend on your offer, traffic, and price. What I promise is a clearer, sharper, more persuasive and honest page. The outcome stays in the market's hands.
Do you make up testimonials or numbers to make it look stronger?
Never. I invent no quotes and no stats, and I use no fake urgency or pressure tricks. I only frame the real proof you give me so it lands with credibility.
How is it delivered, and do I get changes?
You get an editable Word file, a PDF, and a 'what changed and why' note. One revision round is included so you can refine the wording before you publish it on your own page.
What if I'm not happy with it?
There's a fair, easy refund. If the rewrite isn't what you needed, just ask and you get your money back. Fixed price, no friction.
One page, rewritten clear and honest around a single action, for a fixed price and an easy refund.
Buy for $12.90